极 颜 - 上海往事：第十二章 《九星路》 的评论
一那年秋天，我搬了家。钦州南路住了四年，房东要卖房子，让我月底前搬走。我在电话里说好，挂了电话，坐在那间朝南的房间里，看着窗外那棵梧桐树发了一会儿呆。四年。比部队待的时间还长。刚来的时候住那间七...
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The pacing of this chapter is masterful. It doesn’t rush. It lets each moment breathe. Just like the life it describes. Reading it feels like sitting in a room with a tube amp glowing orange, listening to Bill Evans.
The photograph you took in April—the one of the camphor trees in the golden evening light—exists now as a memory of a memory. But you’ve given it to us too. We can see it through your words.
从钦州南路到九星路，从七平米朝北到一室一厅朝南，从一个人到一个人。变化的是地方，不变的是那台胆机，那些唱片，那些习惯。这就是在外地生活的样子。
I noticed how you described the sounds: the firecrackers in the distance like distant drumbeats, someone talking softly downstairs, the bike repair man humming old songs. The soundscape of Jiuxing Road is as vivid as the visuals.
读到“这是我在九星路的第一个除夕。还会有第二个，第三个。不知道。但这一天，过去了。”心里忽然安静下来。不追问未来，不沉湎过去，就好好过完今天。这大概就是你说的慢。
修自行车的老顾，楼下的小林，安徽来的包子铺老板，住楼下的老刘和他四川老婆。这些人一个一个出现，都不多话，但都留下了痕迹。这就是生活。
Your prose has a rhythm that matches the life you’re describing. Short sentences. Pauses. Spaces between thoughts. It makes the reader slow down too. Like walking on Jiuxing Road at dusk.
“那台胆机还亮着，橙黄色的光，暖暖的。”这句话在这章里出现了两次。一次是搬家当天，一次是除夕夜。那种光，是你在上海为自己点的一盏灯。
The move from Qinzhou Road to Jiuxing Road feels like a shift in life phase. Four years in one place, then another. Not running away, just... moving. And taking the important things with you.